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Friday, October 29, 2010

LIKE A LEAF FLOATING IN WATER

Its not tiredness

Its not laziness
Its not even dizziness
Yet the mind refuses to think.

Its not boredom
Its not tragedy
Its not even sadness
Still the soul faints into silence.

I don’t want rest
I don’t want solace
I don’t even want happiness
Still I’m searching something.

I want to be thought-free
I want to be carefree
I want to break-free.
Yet I’m not moving.

Like a leaf, floating in water,
I want the buoyancy.
Like a leaf, moving directionless,
I want to go with the flow.

Let the water take me till the end,
Let me not think anything.
Let me explore the way it comes
Let me be sure to reach till the end….

18 comments:

Tanvi said...

Your site seem to have a virus or a redirecting pop up! Really had to read it in one go. Sorry!

Unknown said...

Hey Tanvi, well I checked from 4 machines that are available to me...My site is clean...Do onething, if you are using Internet Explorer- go to tools > Pop-up Blocker > click Turn On Pop-blocker.
If you are using Google Crome, then go to tools> Security > turn on pop-up blocker. Hopefully, this will solve your problem. Cheers!!

Vibhuti Bhandarkar said...

Heyyy Vivek,
This piece was absolutely beeeeutiful.
I loved the thoughts, the words used to express that thought and the impeccable pictures to go along with them!
Please tell me it s ur photography.
I really wonder why I dint look at floating leaves in this way? Superb imagination...:D

Unknown said...

@Vibhuti, hello :). Thanks it is tonnes of appreciation, I'm so very happy to read your comments :) :). The photos, only the last one is mine. Thanks again for such a kind words for this small piece of imagination. Take Care, Cheers :)

Tanvi said...

Beautifully woven sentences!!! :)

Hey! I use Mac :) But somehow it is opening fine now!

Unknown said...

@Tanvi, Thanks a ton!! I'm glad its working for you now, I certainly do not want to leave people irritated on my site :)

Barbara von Enger said...

Your words fall on the soul like rain on leaves.I adore this poem; your pearl of words.
It's sad, but it is not, it's joyous, but it is not. A paradox; only to be understood by the writer himself. XX

Unknown said...

@Fashion,Art and other fancies, thank you so much. This is certainly among the top appreciations that I have ever received. Thanks again for visiting here and sharing your thoughts. CHEERS !!

Julia, the Thanksgiving Girl said...

Although I can't relate to this feelign completely, I realize that sometimes each of us should just let uourselves relax and go with the flow... Sometimes it's the only option too.

Unknown said...

@Julia, thanks for visiting here again and sharing your thoughts :)

Nidhi Godi said...

nice 1

Unknown said...

@Nidhi, hey thanks :)

Lisette Pool - 24/7 STYLISH said...

Like it ^^
Take a look at my blog too if you like =)

Rachella - flourishingfit.com said...

You wrote this beautiful and you choose the perfect words. :)
xoxo

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Unknown said...

@Lisette, hey thanks for visiting here and sharing your thoughts..hope you visit again :)

Unknown said...

@Theonlyfashionprincess, thanks :)

Aashish Sood said...

@Nanda Sahab: A very very beautiful piece of work... at times I too feel like writing this way but can not find words good enough to describe this way!

Following you on networked!

Unknown said...

@Aashish, thanks for visiting here and sharing your thoughts. I'm glad you liked it, keep visiting here, take care!!

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