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Tuesday, May 17, 2011

YEARN- AN ACROSTIC POEM



Yes, I want it
Even though it’s a little difficult
Another desire, another dream
Rocky journey, but
No one can stop me!!

PS. This is my one more rather short attempt at the Acrostic Poetry, where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title.

13 comments:

BlueRoses said...

Naice! :D

Julia, the Thanksgiving Girl said...

I like it. It's short, on point. And I like how you use the shorter wordss too - makes it easy to read and goes well with the size of teh poem itself!

Vivek Nanda said...

Thank you so much Julia :)
Thanks BlueRoses :)

Erin O'Riordan said...

I like it, too. The photo is beautiful.

Tanvi said...

That is QUITE nice ... Great attempt!!!

♡ from © tanvii.com

Vivek Nanda said...

@Erin, thanks a lot..and Welcome :)..Hope you will enjoy the stuff here...Cheers

Vivek Nanda said...

@Tanvi....Thank you :) :)

Dusk said...

I like it too! It has yearning and purpose and a goal! More, more!

juanca65 said...

Es una falta de respeto al rosario que los católicos utilizamos para venerara a la Virgen María. Porque utilizan de manera desagradable al rosario si no saben para que sirve mejor no lo toquen.Me refiero a esa foto que no deberías colgarla en tu blog.

Vivek Nanda said...

@Dusk, thank you for your sweet words :)

Vivek Nanda said...

@juanca65, Yo respeto todas las religiones y cuando elegí esta imagen no me creo que es una imagen religiosa y no pensé en el contexto positivo del anhelo y la imagen sólo refleja la intención positiva que yo quería expresar ... nada más allá de ella ... gracias por su visita aquí y compartir sus pensamientos.

bee bon said...

clever!

Vivek Nanda said...

@bee bon, thank you :)

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